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The Bleeding Hands of Castaways

By Erick J. Mota
Translated from Spanish by Esther Allen

To my love, the Tramontana wind that shook my life forever.

A book is a bottle flung into the sea.
I want my books
to reach the bleeding hands
of  castaways.

—Samuel Feijóo

I found an old mining asteroid of no interest to anyone, rented it for a few Federation kopeks, and built a bar that matches your eyes, though you’re not here.

I searched through the tangle of collapsing tunnels until I came upon exactly the right space, its acoustics perfect for your voice. I paid zero-atmosphere workers and mining engineers to make that grotto into a perfect cube where I could listen to you. They didn’t charge me as much after I told them about you, played them that old record of you singing Think of me when you’re sad, when you’re crying, think of me when you want to take my life away . . .

. . . piensa en mí cuando sufras,
cuando llores
también piensa en mí.
Cuando quieras
quitarme la vida
no la quiero para nada
para nada
me sirve sin ti . . .

I lined the walls, floor, and ceiling in plastic, suede, and synthetic wood. None of the wholesalers would give me a discount on any of it but I spent the money all the same, spent it for you.

I’d always tell you that for some strange reason I was destined to be a dream. A wave slowly lapping at a rock without detaching a single grain of sand for any future beach. A light, finite rain that barely dampens the earth, no umbrella required.

But you’re a space man, and you needed to build me a bar on an asteroid. A bar with old beer barrels and the perfect acoustics for my voice. You promised you’d even serve a screwdriver with a real screw at the bottom of the glass. At first I laughed at your wild ideas, watching the way you looked at me with your Tuareg eyes. Then, as you explained about gravity conditioners and old USB victrolas that could be had for a song on the inter-orbital black markets and asteroids abandoned to their fate, I sometimes began to see myself in the place you were dreaming up for me. Sometimes, when I was alone, I’d see myself singing with you under the soft lights that you said would be a perfect match for my eyes, singing I’m gonna switch off the light, and think about you, and let my imagination dream . . .

Voy a apagar la luz
para pensar en ti
y así dejar soñar
a la imaginación.
Ahí donde todo lo puede,
donde no hay imposibles,
¿qué importa vivir de ilusiones
si así soy feliz . . . ?

In a street bazaar on Alpha-Pisces I bought a set of bulbs that can go from infrared to ultraviolet. I hired an electrician off a luxury cruise ship to set up the lighting that makes your eyes look so beautiful. I conditioned the air to the exact temperature of your skin and filled it with the scent of exotic flowers that you used to wear back on Old Earth.

In a shipwreck adrift in Epsilon Eridani’s Oort cloud, I found a bar countertop made of authentic wood. A military cargo ship smuggled it in for me and that cost a bundle, but the kind of terrestrial drink that you like has to be served up on real wood. Vodka with citric acids and a screw in the bottom of the glass, whisky without soda, rum with cola-nut soft drink. It was difficult to set the artificial gravity to exactly the same pull as back home. The asteroid didn’t have much mass and was so asymmetrical that going three meters in any direction brought you to a different level of gravitational force. Those generators cost me, in money and friendships. I had to place ads for phantom companies in the limitrophe worlds, mortgage the three astroports that brought customers to the bar, and rely on secondhand androids for maintenance.

But in the end I managed to ensure that the gravitational pull within the bar’s twenty cubic meters was precisely the same as the one that stroked your feet when you danced in the meadows of Old Earth, and that kept your hair flowing beautifully downward and not drifting up over your head. Gravity, which checked and rebuked you from the moment you were born, which made you into a small, light, planetary woman who captivated a space man like me. Gravity, which instilled you with a mortal fear of weightlessness, of the open emptiness of interstellar space. Gravity, which separated us, irremediably. If only you knew how I suffer, if only I could tell you, the bitterness inside me, the sad story, that night after night, in sorrow and pain, reaches my soul . . .

      Si tú supieras mi sufrimiento . . .
Si te contara
la inmensa amargura
que llevo por dentro . . .
La triste historia
que noche tras noche
de dolor y pena
llega a mi alma,
surge a mi memoria
como una condena . . .

And that’s how time went by, too much time for a man who was always gazing out beyond the line of the horizon, too little time for a woman like me, destined to become a dream, her feet firmly planted on the earth she walks across. You had to go. I didn’t cry for you. Women like me don’t know how to cry. Or maybe we do, but only when there’s no one there to see us, so no one can ever say for sure whether we really did cry or not. Waiting for you, out there on the other side of the universe, were new planets, supernovas, and pulsars with strange names.

Who was I to ask you to stay. Once you’​re gone, the shadows will embrace me. Alone with my pain, I’ll remember the days, the blue waves . . .  

Cuando tú te hayas ido
me envolverán las sombras,
cuando tú te hayas ido
con mi dolor a solas
evocaré el idilio
de las azules olas.
Cuando tú te hayas ido
me envolverán las sombras . . .

There I was, Man of the Cosmos, the kind of man who cannot abide weather, germs, or gravity. Despite all my best efforts, outer space never appealed to you in the slightest. Supernovas didn’t make your eyes shine any brighter; pulsars didn’t take your breath away. You were a planetary woman, happy to sing her old songs in an old bar on an old planet. I had to leave, to follow the call of my stars, distant suns that filled my eyes with the light of other worlds.

You packed your bags the last night we looked at the stars together and I smiled when you told me how they’re born, how they die. And how our bar would have a dead sun all its own so it would always be nighttime there. Our nighttime.

Then I smiled again and you walked away as if we’d be seeing each other tomorrow. Or in ten days.

In a month, at the most. We say good-bye, without knowing it, to small things, just as a tree, in autumn, loses its leaves . . .

Uno se despide insensiblemente
de pequeñas cosas,
lo mismo que un árbol
que en tiempo de otoño
se queda sin hojas.
Al fin la tristeza
es la muerte lenta
de las simples cosas
de esas cosas simples
que quedan doliendo en el corazón . . .

So I left.  Only to learn—too late!—that the only supernovas that could set my soul on fire were in your eyes, that all the suns of all my worlds didn’t warm me as much as a single word from you. And that now, now that I’m far away, I need you and the pulsar of your heart.

Your precious gravity.

The bar became a mirage, the best of mirages. Every night I sang all your favorite songs, songs of lost love, songs of trash-talking swagger. The way you see it, I’​m the bad one, the vampire in your novel, the Great Tyrant . . .

Según tu punto de vista
yo soy la mala,
vampiresa en tu novela
la Gran Tirana.
Cada cual en este mundo
cuenta el cuento a su manera
y lo hace ver de otro modo
en la mente de caulquiera . . .

I went back whenever I could, to drink our favorite cocktails. That bar was where I kept wait for you, year after year. I only had to close my eyes and I was with you again, far from the daily routine of life with our twin sons—you never knew about them, did you? The bar was a refuge, a warm lair where my memories were safe. It’s been my life raft in old age, old age that is taking hold of me now and making me write you all this, by way of farewell.

That’s why my bar—I mean your bar—had no windows, no portholes. Just a cube of bulkhead with a long wooden counter on one side and a USB-victrola—the old-fashioned kind they used to make before the advent of the celestial jukebox, the kind found nowadays only in bars on the remotest outposts. The kind that plays songs in archaic Spanish, sad songs of distant loves, songs that plunge the cosmonauts  from the Tavarish-ring into deep bouts of nostalgia and make tears slide down the faces of the Marines from the system’s orbital base. All the songs you used to sing. In the only place in the universe where the acoustics are perfectly designed for that huskiness in your voice. If you leave me now, you’​ll soon find out, that the days are long and empty without me . . .

 . . . Si ahora tú te vas
pronto descubrirás
que los días son eternos y vacíos
sin mí.
Y de noche,
y de noche
por no sentirte solo . . .
Recordarás nuestros días felices,
recordarás el sabor de mis besos . . .
Y entenderás en un solo momento
qué significa un año de amor . . .

I looked for your name in the news, but in vain, looked for advertisements for the bar you’d promised and dreamed of and yearned for. All in vain. Your sons were space men, too, but neither one of them ever heard word anywhere in their travels of a place that bore my name, where screwdrivers were served with a real, actual screw in the bottom of the glass. To make me happy, they brought me hundreds of coasters from every corner of the universe, photos of every bar they ever visited within and beyond the galaxy. Swizzle sticks made from a thousand and one materials, everything imaginable. I asked them to tell me about the lighting, the music, the scent of the air, and was glad to know our sons were happy, modern, moving fast . . . And then, when I was alone again, I was sad that your hand hadn’t touched any of the marvelous places they told me about. Then later—you know how fast time goes by around here—the grandchildren arrived. When they were little, I used to hold them and sing them to sleep. It hurts, it hurts to see you gone, to know it’s the end, of all your kisses . . .

. . . duele mucho,
duele verte sin regreso . . .
Saber que ha llegado el fin
de todos tus besos,
y que es por mi culpa que estoy
hoy padeciendo mi suerte.
Duele mucho ser como soy . . .
Duele mucho
vivir . . .

I’ll be honest with you, my voice wasn’t the same anymore. Sometimes it gave out altogether. It pained me to think that if you ever did open up that bar some day, I wouldn’t be able to sing for you there.

I built a bar exactly to your measure. The only reason I excavated that rock was to find the perfect place, the place where you would feel perfect. I rented an asteroid in a planetary system where the sun was dead, only so I could keep my promise.

By now, I’d rather you didn’t come back. An old lady like me should stay home quietly by her lamp, with no intergalactic adventures to make her pulse accelerate.

I wanted to make a bar that would be a perfect match for you. A place built just for you. And I did.

Even though I had to sell my ship to rent this rock in its hyperbolic orbit around a dying sun. Even though the barkeepers’ union exacts a wage I cannot pay. Even though the customers want strippers and crazy far-out music. Even though they want their beer to come from a shiny stainless steel tap, not an old barrel.

Even if I die because I built this bar.

They say that many years ago—and who remembers all that now?— desperate castaways used to write messages, put them in bottles, and throw them into the sea. Our smallest grandson is setting off on his last voyage today. He, too, has lived his life as a space man. I still have one last, remote chance. I’ll put this message in a bottle and at some point in his journey he’ll throw it off his ship. Wait for me in heaven, my heart, if you go first. Wait for me and soon I’​ll come, to start all over again . . .

 . . . espérame en el cielo, corazón,
si es que te vas primero.
Espérame que pronto yo me iré
para empezar de nuevo . . .
Nuestro amor es tan grande
y tan grande
que nunca termina,
y esta vida es tan corta que no basta
para nuestro idilio . . .

I know it’s foolish, a silly whim, but it’s his grandmother’s last wish. And he’s a good boy.

And I have nothing to lose, nothing to hope for.

Because I’m 183 light-years away from home. Because as soon as the Tcherenkov propulsion system took us out of light speed I learned from the ansible that your grandchildren have all died of old age back there on Old Earth. There was nothing I could do but build this place and sit down at the wooden bar with a glass of rum in front of me, waiting for pirates to show up and raze the whole system or order a round of drinks. Waiting for something to crash into this sliver of rock, or for the dying star at the center of our wobbly orbit to finally explode.

I kept my promise, and I’m waiting only for you, by the hand and grace of whatever mystery it is that governs the universe, for you to be here with me. Until the helium-3 reactors overcharge and explode. Or the cavity we excavated collapses because the androids do such poor work.

While I’m waiting for something to happen, I put another song on the victrola. And I was filled with dreams, and drank to glory, knowing I didn’t belong to myself. For I forgot all the things, that in this world, make our joy short, and our sorrow long . . .

 . . . y me llené de ensueños
y le brindé la gloria
sabiendo que yo misma no me pertenecía.
Pues me olvidé de todas
las cosas que en el mundo
hacen la dicha corta
y larga la agonía . . .
Perdóname,
Perdóname, conciencia,
razón sé que tenías . . .

And maybe someday—who knows?—someone might walk into your bar, an astronaut who makes his living collecting the kind of garbage that ends up floating around in outer space. He’ll have this bottle in his hand and will try to sell it to you. Such a quaint, charming object: a sealed bottle with a mysterious note inside. And it’s only that silly, cockamamie hope that allows me to die in peace. Knowing that you know.

That you will know.

That maybe, someday, in the end, you’ll know . . .

Playlist (“Bleeding Hands”):

“Piensa en mí” (1935), by Agustín and Maria Teresa Lara, sung by Natalia Fourcade and Vicentico.

“Voy a apagar la luz” (1960–67), by Armando Manzanero, sung by Luis Miguel.

“Si te contara” (2006), by Ibrahim Ferrer, sung by Willie Colón.

“Cuando tu te hayas ido (Sombras)” (1936), music by Carlos Brito Benavides, lyrics from a poem by Rosario Sansores Pren, sung by Soledad Bravo.

“Canción de las simples cosas” (1972), music by César Isella, lyrics by Armando Tejada Gomez, sung by Buika.

“La Tirana” (1968), by Tite Curet Alonso, sung by La Lupe. 

“Un año de amor” (1991), by Nino Ferrer, sung by Luz Casal.

“Duele” (1986), by Ruben Blades, sung by Ruben Blades.

“Espérame en el cielo” (1962), by Francisco López Vidal, sung by Silvia Pérez Cruz.

“Perdóname conciencia” (1966), by Giraldo Piloto and Alberto Vera, sung by Moraima Secada.

© Erick J. Mota. By arrangement with the author. Translation © 2016 by Esther Allen. All rights reserved.
English Spanish (Original)

To my love, the Tramontana wind that shook my life forever.

A book is a bottle flung into the sea.
I want my books
to reach the bleeding hands
of  castaways.

—Samuel Feijóo

I found an old mining asteroid of no interest to anyone, rented it for a few Federation kopeks, and built a bar that matches your eyes, though you’re not here.

I searched through the tangle of collapsing tunnels until I came upon exactly the right space, its acoustics perfect for your voice. I paid zero-atmosphere workers and mining engineers to make that grotto into a perfect cube where I could listen to you. They didn’t charge me as much after I told them about you, played them that old record of you singing Think of me when you’re sad, when you’re crying, think of me when you want to take my life away . . .

. . . piensa en mí cuando sufras,
cuando llores
también piensa en mí.
Cuando quieras
quitarme la vida
no la quiero para nada
para nada
me sirve sin ti . . .

I lined the walls, floor, and ceiling in plastic, suede, and synthetic wood. None of the wholesalers would give me a discount on any of it but I spent the money all the same, spent it for you.

I’d always tell you that for some strange reason I was destined to be a dream. A wave slowly lapping at a rock without detaching a single grain of sand for any future beach. A light, finite rain that barely dampens the earth, no umbrella required.

But you’re a space man, and you needed to build me a bar on an asteroid. A bar with old beer barrels and the perfect acoustics for my voice. You promised you’d even serve a screwdriver with a real screw at the bottom of the glass. At first I laughed at your wild ideas, watching the way you looked at me with your Tuareg eyes. Then, as you explained about gravity conditioners and old USB victrolas that could be had for a song on the inter-orbital black markets and asteroids abandoned to their fate, I sometimes began to see myself in the place you were dreaming up for me. Sometimes, when I was alone, I’d see myself singing with you under the soft lights that you said would be a perfect match for my eyes, singing I’m gonna switch off the light, and think about you, and let my imagination dream . . .

Voy a apagar la luz
para pensar en ti
y así dejar soñar
a la imaginación.
Ahí donde todo lo puede,
donde no hay imposibles,
¿qué importa vivir de ilusiones
si así soy feliz . . . ?

In a street bazaar on Alpha-Pisces I bought a set of bulbs that can go from infrared to ultraviolet. I hired an electrician off a luxury cruise ship to set up the lighting that makes your eyes look so beautiful. I conditioned the air to the exact temperature of your skin and filled it with the scent of exotic flowers that you used to wear back on Old Earth.

In a shipwreck adrift in Epsilon Eridani’s Oort cloud, I found a bar countertop made of authentic wood. A military cargo ship smuggled it in for me and that cost a bundle, but the kind of terrestrial drink that you like has to be served up on real wood. Vodka with citric acids and a screw in the bottom of the glass, whisky without soda, rum with cola-nut soft drink. It was difficult to set the artificial gravity to exactly the same pull as back home. The asteroid didn’t have much mass and was so asymmetrical that going three meters in any direction brought you to a different level of gravitational force. Those generators cost me, in money and friendships. I had to place ads for phantom companies in the limitrophe worlds, mortgage the three astroports that brought customers to the bar, and rely on secondhand androids for maintenance.

But in the end I managed to ensure that the gravitational pull within the bar’s twenty cubic meters was precisely the same as the one that stroked your feet when you danced in the meadows of Old Earth, and that kept your hair flowing beautifully downward and not drifting up over your head. Gravity, which checked and rebuked you from the moment you were born, which made you into a small, light, planetary woman who captivated a space man like me. Gravity, which instilled you with a mortal fear of weightlessness, of the open emptiness of interstellar space. Gravity, which separated us, irremediably. If only you knew how I suffer, if only I could tell you, the bitterness inside me, the sad story, that night after night, in sorrow and pain, reaches my soul . . .

      Si tú supieras mi sufrimiento . . .
Si te contara
la inmensa amargura
que llevo por dentro . . .
La triste historia
que noche tras noche
de dolor y pena
llega a mi alma,
surge a mi memoria
como una condena . . .

And that’s how time went by, too much time for a man who was always gazing out beyond the line of the horizon, too little time for a woman like me, destined to become a dream, her feet firmly planted on the earth she walks across. You had to go. I didn’t cry for you. Women like me don’t know how to cry. Or maybe we do, but only when there’s no one there to see us, so no one can ever say for sure whether we really did cry or not. Waiting for you, out there on the other side of the universe, were new planets, supernovas, and pulsars with strange names.

Who was I to ask you to stay. Once you’​re gone, the shadows will embrace me. Alone with my pain, I’ll remember the days, the blue waves . . .  

Cuando tú te hayas ido
me envolverán las sombras,
cuando tú te hayas ido
con mi dolor a solas
evocaré el idilio
de las azules olas.
Cuando tú te hayas ido
me envolverán las sombras . . .

There I was, Man of the Cosmos, the kind of man who cannot abide weather, germs, or gravity. Despite all my best efforts, outer space never appealed to you in the slightest. Supernovas didn’t make your eyes shine any brighter; pulsars didn’t take your breath away. You were a planetary woman, happy to sing her old songs in an old bar on an old planet. I had to leave, to follow the call of my stars, distant suns that filled my eyes with the light of other worlds.

You packed your bags the last night we looked at the stars together and I smiled when you told me how they’re born, how they die. And how our bar would have a dead sun all its own so it would always be nighttime there. Our nighttime.

Then I smiled again and you walked away as if we’d be seeing each other tomorrow. Or in ten days.

In a month, at the most. We say good-bye, without knowing it, to small things, just as a tree, in autumn, loses its leaves . . .

Uno se despide insensiblemente
de pequeñas cosas,
lo mismo que un árbol
que en tiempo de otoño
se queda sin hojas.
Al fin la tristeza
es la muerte lenta
de las simples cosas
de esas cosas simples
que quedan doliendo en el corazón . . .

So I left.  Only to learn—too late!—that the only supernovas that could set my soul on fire were in your eyes, that all the suns of all my worlds didn’t warm me as much as a single word from you. And that now, now that I’m far away, I need you and the pulsar of your heart.

Your precious gravity.

The bar became a mirage, the best of mirages. Every night I sang all your favorite songs, songs of lost love, songs of trash-talking swagger. The way you see it, I’​m the bad one, the vampire in your novel, the Great Tyrant . . .

Según tu punto de vista
yo soy la mala,
vampiresa en tu novela
la Gran Tirana.
Cada cual en este mundo
cuenta el cuento a su manera
y lo hace ver de otro modo
en la mente de caulquiera . . .

I went back whenever I could, to drink our favorite cocktails. That bar was where I kept wait for you, year after year. I only had to close my eyes and I was with you again, far from the daily routine of life with our twin sons—you never knew about them, did you? The bar was a refuge, a warm lair where my memories were safe. It’s been my life raft in old age, old age that is taking hold of me now and making me write you all this, by way of farewell.

That’s why my bar—I mean your bar—had no windows, no portholes. Just a cube of bulkhead with a long wooden counter on one side and a USB-victrola—the old-fashioned kind they used to make before the advent of the celestial jukebox, the kind found nowadays only in bars on the remotest outposts. The kind that plays songs in archaic Spanish, sad songs of distant loves, songs that plunge the cosmonauts  from the Tavarish-ring into deep bouts of nostalgia and make tears slide down the faces of the Marines from the system’s orbital base. All the songs you used to sing. In the only place in the universe where the acoustics are perfectly designed for that huskiness in your voice. If you leave me now, you’​ll soon find out, that the days are long and empty without me . . .

 . . . Si ahora tú te vas
pronto descubrirás
que los días son eternos y vacíos
sin mí.
Y de noche,
y de noche
por no sentirte solo . . .
Recordarás nuestros días felices,
recordarás el sabor de mis besos . . .
Y entenderás en un solo momento
qué significa un año de amor . . .

I looked for your name in the news, but in vain, looked for advertisements for the bar you’d promised and dreamed of and yearned for. All in vain. Your sons were space men, too, but neither one of them ever heard word anywhere in their travels of a place that bore my name, where screwdrivers were served with a real, actual screw in the bottom of the glass. To make me happy, they brought me hundreds of coasters from every corner of the universe, photos of every bar they ever visited within and beyond the galaxy. Swizzle sticks made from a thousand and one materials, everything imaginable. I asked them to tell me about the lighting, the music, the scent of the air, and was glad to know our sons were happy, modern, moving fast . . . And then, when I was alone again, I was sad that your hand hadn’t touched any of the marvelous places they told me about. Then later—you know how fast time goes by around here—the grandchildren arrived. When they were little, I used to hold them and sing them to sleep. It hurts, it hurts to see you gone, to know it’s the end, of all your kisses . . .

. . . duele mucho,
duele verte sin regreso . . .
Saber que ha llegado el fin
de todos tus besos,
y que es por mi culpa que estoy
hoy padeciendo mi suerte.
Duele mucho ser como soy . . .
Duele mucho
vivir . . .

I’ll be honest with you, my voice wasn’t the same anymore. Sometimes it gave out altogether. It pained me to think that if you ever did open up that bar some day, I wouldn’t be able to sing for you there.

I built a bar exactly to your measure. The only reason I excavated that rock was to find the perfect place, the place where you would feel perfect. I rented an asteroid in a planetary system where the sun was dead, only so I could keep my promise.

By now, I’d rather you didn’t come back. An old lady like me should stay home quietly by her lamp, with no intergalactic adventures to make her pulse accelerate.

I wanted to make a bar that would be a perfect match for you. A place built just for you. And I did.

Even though I had to sell my ship to rent this rock in its hyperbolic orbit around a dying sun. Even though the barkeepers’ union exacts a wage I cannot pay. Even though the customers want strippers and crazy far-out music. Even though they want their beer to come from a shiny stainless steel tap, not an old barrel.

Even if I die because I built this bar.

They say that many years ago—and who remembers all that now?— desperate castaways used to write messages, put them in bottles, and throw them into the sea. Our smallest grandson is setting off on his last voyage today. He, too, has lived his life as a space man. I still have one last, remote chance. I’ll put this message in a bottle and at some point in his journey he’ll throw it off his ship. Wait for me in heaven, my heart, if you go first. Wait for me and soon I’​ll come, to start all over again . . .

 . . . espérame en el cielo, corazón,
si es que te vas primero.
Espérame que pronto yo me iré
para empezar de nuevo . . .
Nuestro amor es tan grande
y tan grande
que nunca termina,
y esta vida es tan corta que no basta
para nuestro idilio . . .

I know it’s foolish, a silly whim, but it’s his grandmother’s last wish. And he’s a good boy.

And I have nothing to lose, nothing to hope for.

Because I’m 183 light-years away from home. Because as soon as the Tcherenkov propulsion system took us out of light speed I learned from the ansible that your grandchildren have all died of old age back there on Old Earth. There was nothing I could do but build this place and sit down at the wooden bar with a glass of rum in front of me, waiting for pirates to show up and raze the whole system or order a round of drinks. Waiting for something to crash into this sliver of rock, or for the dying star at the center of our wobbly orbit to finally explode.

I kept my promise, and I’m waiting only for you, by the hand and grace of whatever mystery it is that governs the universe, for you to be here with me. Until the helium-3 reactors overcharge and explode. Or the cavity we excavated collapses because the androids do such poor work.

While I’m waiting for something to happen, I put another song on the victrola. And I was filled with dreams, and drank to glory, knowing I didn’t belong to myself. For I forgot all the things, that in this world, make our joy short, and our sorrow long . . .

 . . . y me llené de ensueños
y le brindé la gloria
sabiendo que yo misma no me pertenecía.
Pues me olvidé de todas
las cosas que en el mundo
hacen la dicha corta
y larga la agonía . . .
Perdóname,
Perdóname, conciencia,
razón sé que tenías . . .

And maybe someday—who knows?—someone might walk into your bar, an astronaut who makes his living collecting the kind of garbage that ends up floating around in outer space. He’ll have this bottle in his hand and will try to sell it to you. Such a quaint, charming object: a sealed bottle with a mysterious note inside. And it’s only that silly, cockamamie hope that allows me to die in peace. Knowing that you know.

That you will know.

That maybe, someday, in the end, you’ll know . . .

Playlist (“Bleeding Hands”):

“Piensa en mí” (1935), by Agustín and Maria Teresa Lara, sung by Natalia Fourcade and Vicentico.

“Voy a apagar la luz” (1960–67), by Armando Manzanero, sung by Luis Miguel.

“Si te contara” (2006), by Ibrahim Ferrer, sung by Willie Colón.

“Cuando tu te hayas ido (Sombras)” (1936), music by Carlos Brito Benavides, lyrics from a poem by Rosario Sansores Pren, sung by Soledad Bravo.

“Canción de las simples cosas” (1972), music by César Isella, lyrics by Armando Tejada Gomez, sung by Buika.

“La Tirana” (1968), by Tite Curet Alonso, sung by La Lupe. 

“Un año de amor” (1991), by Nino Ferrer, sung by Luz Casal.

“Duele” (1986), by Ruben Blades, sung by Ruben Blades.

“Espérame en el cielo” (1962), by Francisco López Vidal, sung by Silvia Pérez Cruz.

“Perdóname conciencia” (1966), by Giraldo Piloto and Alberto Vera, sung by Moraima Secada.

© Erick J. Mota. By arrangement with the author. Translation © 2016 by Esther Allen. All rights reserved.

Las Manos Rotas de los Náufragos

Dedicado a mi amor, al viento de Tramontana que sacudió mi vida para siempre.

 Un libro es una botella al mar.
Yo quiero que los míos
vayan a las manos rotas
de los náufragos.

—Samuel Feijóo

Construí un bar que combinara con tus ojos, aunque no estuvieras aquí.
Encontré un viejo asteroide minero que no interesaba a nadie y lo alquilé por un par de kopeks confederados.

Busqué la cavidad adecuada, dentro del reguero de túneles a punto del derrumbe, hasta que encontré la acústica perfecta para tu voz. Pagué a obreros de atmosfera cero y a ingenieros de minas para que aquella gruta fuera un cubo perfecto para oírte. No me cobraron tanto cuando les hablé de ti. Cuando les puse aquella vieja grabación tuya cantando.

. . . piensa en mí cuando sufras,
cuando llores
también piensa en mí.
Cuando quieras
quitarme la vida
no la quiero para nada
para nada
me sirve sin ti . . .

Forré las paredes, el piso y el techo en madera sintética, plástico y gamuza. En esto no hubo rebajas por parte de los mayoristas. Igual gasté el dinero en tu nombre.

 

Siempre te dije que, por alguna extraña razón, estaba destinada a ser un sueño. Una ola que lame la roca despacio, sin desprender siquiera un granito de arena para futuras playas. Una lluvia finita y leve, de las que casi no mojan el suelo ni merecen un paraguas.

Pero tú eras un hombre del espacio y necesitabas construirme un bar en un asteroide. Un bar con viejos toneles de cerveza. Con la acústica perfecta para mi voz. Me prometiste incluso servir el Screwdriver con un tornillo real y verdadero en el fondo. Al principio me reí de tu extravagante idea y te miré cómo me mirabas con tus ojos hermosos de tuareg del desierto.
Luego, cuando me explicaste de los acondicionadores de gravedad, de las viejas victrolas-USB que valían casi nada en el mercado negro inter orbital, de los asteroides abandonados a su suerte, empecé a verme por momentos en aquel lugar que tú soñabas para mí. Y cuando estaba a solas, me veía cantando contigo bajo aquellas luces bajas que, me contabas, harían juego con mis ojos

Voy a apagar la luz
para pensar en ti
y así dejar soñar
a la imaginación.
Ahí donde todo lo puede,
donde no hay imposibles,
¿qué importa vivir de ilusiones
si así soy feliz . . .?

Compré en las candongas de Alfa-Pisces un juego de luces que iba del infrarrojo al ultravioleta. Contraté a un mecánico de cruceros de lujo para que fijara el sistema en la luz que hace a tus ojos verse tan hermosos.
Acondicioné el lugar a la temperatura exacta de tu piel y con el olor de las plantas exóticas que usabas en Vieja Tierra.

Encontré una barra de bar, hecha con madera auténtica, en un pecio encallado en la nube de Oort de Epsilon-Eridianis. La hice traer de contrabando en un carguero militar. Pagué de más, pero necesitaba servir sobre ella las bebidas terrícolas que te gustan. Vodka con ácidos cítricos y un tornillo en el fondo, Whisky sin soda y Ron con refresco de nuez de cola.

Fue difícil acondicionar la gravedad artificial para que fuera igual a la de casa. La masa del asteroide no era mucha. Su forma era suficientemente caprichosa como para que cada tres metros hubiera una fuerza de gravedad diferente, en cualquier dirección. Los generadores costaron dinero y amistades. Tuve que poner anuncios de compañías fantasmas en los mundos limítrofes, hipotecar los tres astropuertos que nutrían de clientela al bar y emplear androides de segunda mano para el mantenimiento.

Al final conseguí que dentro de los veinte metros cúbicos de bar, la gravedad fuera igual a la que acariciaba tus pies cuando bailabas en el prado, la que hacía que tu pelo no flotara por el aire y siguiera siendo bello. La gravedad que te castigó desde niña y te hizo pequeña y liviana. La que hizo de ti una mujer planetaria que cautivó a un hombre del espacio como yo. La que te impregnó de la maldición del miedo a la impesantés y a los espacios estelares abiertos. La gravedad que nos separó, irremediablemente.

     Si tú supieras mi sufrimiento . . .
Si te contara
la inmensa amargura
que llevo por dentro . . .
La triste historia
que noche tras noche
de dolor y pena
llega a mi alma,
surge a mi memoria
como una condena . . . 

Así pasó el tiempo, demasiado tiempo para un hombre que miraba siempre por encima de la línea del horizonte, demasiado poco para una mujer como yo, destinada a ser un sueño con los pies bien puestos en la tierra que pisa. Tuviste que marcharte y no lloré. Las mujeres como yo no sabemos llorar. O lloramos cuando no nos ve nadie, con lo cual nadie puede dar fe de si lloramos o no. Allá, en la otra punta del universo te esperaban nuevos planetas, supernovas, pulsares de nombres caprichosos . . .

Quién era yo para pedir que te quedaras.

Cuando tú te hayas ido
me envolverán las sombras,
cuando tú te hayas ido
con mi dolor a solas
evocaré el idilio
de las azules olas.
Cuando tú te hayas ido
me envolverán las sombras . . . 

Yo, un Hombre del Cosmos, de esos que odian el clima, los gérmenes y la gravedad. Jamás logré seducirte con el espacio. Las supernovas no alimentaban el brillo de tus ojos. Los pulsares no cortaban tu aliento. Eras una mujer planetaria que se contentaba con cantar en un viejo bar de un viejo planeta. Yo tuve que partir, seguir el llamado de mis estrellas, esos soles lejanos que habían impregnado mis ojos con la luz de otros mundos.

 

Hice tus maletas la noche última en que miramos juntos las estrellas y sonreí cuando me contaste de cómo nacían y de cómo morían. Y de cómo nuestro bar tendría para sí un sol muerto, para que fuera siempre de noche.
Nuestra noche.

Luego volví a sonreír y tú saliste andando como si fuéramos a vernos mañana. Dentro de diez días.

Un mes cuando más.

Uno se despide insensiblemente
de pequeñas cosas,
lo mismo que un árbol
que en tiempo de otoño
se queda sin hojas.
Al fin la tristeza
es la muerte lenta
de las simples cosas
de esas cosas simples
que quedan doliendo en el corazón . . . 

Y me fui. Solo para comprender demasiado tarde que solo las supernovas de tus ojos encienden mi alma. Que ya los soles de mil mundos no calientan mi pecho como una palabra tuya. Que ahora, que estoy lejos, necesito de ti y de tus pulsares.

De tu preciada gravedad.

 

Y el bar se convirtió en un espejismo. El mejor de todos.
Allí canté cada noche las canciones que más te gustaba escuchar: las de amores perdidos y guapería barata.

Según tu punto de vista
yo soy la mala,
vampiresa en tu novela
la Gran Tirana.
Cada cual en este mundo
cuenta el cuento a su manera
y lo hace ver de otro modo
en la mente de cualquiera . . . 

Allí bebí, siempre que pude, nuestros tragos preferidos. Allí esperé por tu regreso todos los años. No más cerrar los ojos y estaba contigo, lejos de la rutina cotidiana de los gemelos que tuvimos sin que lo supieras. El bar estaba ahí como un refugio, como una especie de guarida tibia donde acunar los recuerdos. Ha sido mi tabla de salvación en la vejez que ahora me vence y hace que escriba para ti esta suerte de despedida.

 

Por eso mi bar—digo, tu bar—no tuvo ventanas, ni claraboyas. Solo un mamparo cúbico con barra y victrola-USB. Una de las viejas, anteriores a las rocolas universales, de las que solo tienen los bares de los puestos remotos. Con canciones en español arcaico, canciones tristes de amores lejanos. Canciones que despiertan la nostalgia de los cosmonautas del anillo-tavarish y hacen llorar a los marines de la base orbital del sistema. Todas las canciones que tú cantabas. En el único lugar del universo que tiene una acústica perfectamente diseñada para el tono ronco de tu voz.

. . . Si ahora tú te vas
pronto descubrirás
que los días son eternos y vacíos
sin mí.
Y de noche,
y de noche
por no sentirte solo . . .
Recordarás nuestros días felices,
recordarás el sabor de mis besos…
Y entenderás en un solo momento
qué significa un año de amor . . .

En vano busqué tu nombre en las noticias. En vano los anuncios de aquel bar tantas veces prometido y soñado y anhelado. Tus hijos también fueron hombres del espacio y ninguno supo nunca de un lugar con mi nombre, donde sirvieran el screwdriver con un tornillo real y verdadero en el fondo. Por alegrarme, me trajeron cientos de porta vasos de todos los confines del universo, fotos de cuanto bar visitaron dentro y fuera de la galaxia. Revolvedores de los mil y un materiales imaginados. Yo les pedía que me contaran de luz, de la música, del olor… y me alegraba de saberlos alegres, modernos, trepidantes… y me entristecía luego, a solas, de saber que en ninguno de esos lugares maravillosos habías puesto tú tu mano.
Más tarde, ya sabes cómo pasa de rápido el tiempo por acá, vinieron los nietos. De pequeños solía tenerlos en mi regazo y dormirlos cantando.

. . . duele mucho,
duele verte sin regreso . . .
Saber que llega el fin
de todos tus besos,
que es por mi culpa que estoy
hoy padeciendo mi suerte.
Duele mucho ser como soy . . .
Duele,
duele
vivir . . .

Ya mi voz no era la de antes, te soy franca. Por momentos se ajaba y yo sentía pena de saber que si algún día llegabas a abrir ese bar, ya no podría cantar para ti.

 

Hice un bar justo a la medida de ti. Excavé en la roca solo para encontrar el sitio perfecto donde tú sentarías perfecta. Renté un asteroide en un sistema planetario con un sol muerto tan solo para cumplir mi promesa.

 

Ahora prefiero que no vuelvas por mí. Una anciana como yo debe quedarse tranquila junto a la lumbre, sin aventuras intergalácticas que le aceleren demasiado el pulso.

 

Haría un bar que encajara contigo. Un sitio solo para ti.
Y lo hice.

Pese a que hube de vender mi nave para alquilar esta piedra en órbita hiperbólica, alrededor de un sol moribundo. A sabiendas de que el sindicato de los meseros exige un salario que no puedo pagar. Aunque los clientes pidan strippers y música estrafalaria. Aunque todos quieran cerveza dispensada y no de tonel.

Aunque muera a consecuencia de haber construido este bar.

 

Sin embargo hace muchos años, quién se acuerda de eso, cuentan que los náufragos desesperados escribían mensajes y los lanzaban al mar metidos en una botella. Nuestro nieto más pequeño hará hoy su último viaje. Él también ha sido un hombre del espacio. Tengo aún la última y remota posibilidad. Meteré este mensaje en una botella y en algún momento él la impulsará hacia fuera de su nave.

. . . espérame en el cielo, corazón,     
si es que te vas primero.
Espérame que pronto yo me iré
para empezar de nuevo…
Nuestro amor es tan grande
y tan grande
que nunca termina,
y la vida es tan corta que no basta
para nuestro idilio . . . 

Ya sé que es una tontería, un capricho, pero es el último deseo de su abuela y él es un buen muchacho.
Y yo no tengo nada que perder.
Nada que esperar.

 

Porque estoy a 183 años luz de casa. Porque apenas la propulsión Tcherenkov desaceleró de la velocidad luz supe, por el ansible, que tus nietos han muerto de viejos allá en Vieja Tierra. No tenía más remedio que construir este bar y sentarme en la barra frente a un vaso de ron a esperar que los piratas asolen el sistema o vengan a por bebida. A esperar que algo choque contra este antro o que la estrella explote.

Cumplí mi promesa y solo espero que tú, por obra y gracia de cualquier misterio que rige el universo, estés aquí conmigo. Hasta que los reactores de helio III exploten por exceso de carga. O la cavidad se derrumbe por mal trabajo de los androides.

Mientras espero que algo ocurra, pongo la victrola . . .

. . . y me llené de ensueños
y le brindé la gloria
sabiendo que yo misma no me pertenecía.
Pues me olvidé de todas
las cosas que en el mundo
hacen la dicha corta
y larga la agonía . . .
Perdóname,
Perdóname, conciencia,
razón sé que tenías,
pero en aquel momento
todo fue sentimiento
la razón no valía . . .

Y a lo mejor un día, ¿quién sabe? A tu barra llega alguien, uno de esos astronautas que se ganan la vida recogiendo la basura que va a parar al espacio. Llevará esta botella en la mano e intentará vendértela como algo muy pintoresco. Una botella sellada y con una misteriosa nota dentro.
Gracias a esa disparatada esperanza, podré morir tranquila.
Sabiendo que tú sabes.

Que tú sabrás.

Que a lo mejor llegas a saber . . .

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